Tuesday, June 7, 2016

Clichés - Why Yes, They Work

Today, we’re going to talk about something else that a writer uses a lot, even though they shouldn’t.  They’re clichés, the tool in our arsenal that we’re not supposed to use, because nobody wants to read the same thing twice.  However, as much as that is true, I have an argument for why they actually work.  You might have heard this argument before, which I’m hoping isn’t the case, but here it goes.

Clichés work because, at the core of nearly all stories, we’re retelling something.  It’s a new idea or a new way to go about it, but, honestly, we’re copying a lot of the same stories from before.  Here’s another curveball for you – it’s not a bad thing.  It’s literature’s natural selection.  These stories get retold, in different formats, because they’re the stories that we want to listen to.  They’re the stories that are going to survive throughout generations, even if only a small handful of people read them.  It’s why, at the library, they have those sample bookmarks of “if you like Neil Gaiman” and then a list of other authors to try.  It’s because even though one book is different from the next due to characters or plot, we see we’re going on the hero’s journey.  We see that the detective is going to attempt to catch the killer and will or won’t by the end of the novel.  We see there’s going to be romantic tension until the couple gets together and then torn apart again only to have a happy ending.  We see, in literary fiction itself, that a main character goes from being a kid who lost his mother because of his best friend to someone who accepts the greater mysteries of life.  Now, Prayer for Omen Meany has a bigger meaning than the one sentence version I just wrote out.  You should go read it and it’s one of my favorite novels.

Going back to clichés, before I bury the lead entirely, is that we’re told it’s a bad thing.  It’s a no-no.  But, considering all that we know, is it really true?  I don’t think so.  Considering the amount of television on right now that is either a procedural – thanks to ER or Law and Order or soap operas – or comedy that follows a certain pattern, it’s showing that we want the clichés.  I can even point it out in literature where you cannot find a good fantasy novel where the male main character and the female main character don’t get together by the end.  I will go happily read a fantasy novel that is not A Song of Fire and Ice where that doesn’t happen by the end of the novel or series.  Leave a comment down below as I’m always looking for more to read.  Or give me a detective novel where the bad guy isn’t captured by the end of the novel or the series.  We want our clichés, in the broad sense of the word, and we should not be afraid to embrace them as writers.

In that same vein, we shouldn’t be afraid to write stock characters, like the naïve chosen one.  What we need to do is change how they come about it.  Harry Potter is successful because of how he became the chosen one.  Yes, there is a prophecy that he is the one to vanquish the Dark Lord (hello fantasy clichés - a two for one) but there were two who could have fit that prophecy.  How different is Harry Potter if Neville Longbottom was the one that Voldemort picked?  How successful would that story have been if Neville was the main character and gone through everything Harry did?  It’s too much of a stretch, considering how Neville is introduced and written until the seventh book where he shines.  He’s the one who kills Nagini with the Gryffindor sword and kept up Dumbledore’s Army while Harry’s off saving the world.  Would J.K. Rowling have written Neville differently if Neville was the one Voldemort gone after?  Or would Neville be dead and the Harry Potter series a lot darker?  We don’t know because the cliché was kept of the naïve chosen one who, despite his limited faults, vanquished evil and the world is better for it.

That is one big example on how clichés can work.  I can go on, and will if anybody wants me to, but you get the idea.  Clichés are good if you can wrap them up all bright and shiny and new.  The advice for today is as same as I gave at the top of the post.  Embrace your clichés in the genre you’re writing.  You can use them, you’ve just got to make them interesting.  It’s the same as in everything in life.  You’ve got an amazing idea, that others have done, but you have a different take.  It is not wrong to keep to what we’ve read as they get through.  Unless the publication industry is going to shut down completely, we’re going to keep on reading clichés.  Why not take the old clichéd advice and write what you know?  As shown time and time again, it works.


Until next time, keep on writing.

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